• You like that ending, eh? I wasn’t sure how it would make people feel. I felt like a bit of a twist ending would be a positive, however I wasn’t sure about that specific ending.

  1. Oh ow…. ow… ow… I had that happen to a tooth literally three weeks before our wedding, and your wonderful ‘visual’ created by that just reminded me of the feeling, the sound and the pain… GAH. I’ve got goosebumps now!

    • As someone who has had this happen to teeth far more often than I’d like to admit, it’s not a pleasant feeling by any means. It didn’t hurt me to write it, though I’m admittedly a bit surprised.

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